I worked more on the 40x40 today; decided to take a break from the city painting and try to get this more resolved. The background might be a problem, since it looks like its covered in a fog layer that reads as water. I'll need to keep it dark enough to push it back or just get rid of it. The problem there would be that the sky wouldn't really show much at this steep angle and I do like the lighter look of a morning sky. Maybe I'll play around with the sun up there and see if I can keep it abstract and blend it into the background haze. The city of San Francisco I still need to define with some more detail, showing some of the buildings.
Richard